In writing I have been focusing on sentences. I have been learning to use different types of sentences to make my writing more interesting. Here is a Slide that I made with different sentence types in it.
Feedback: I like how you had a wide range of adverbial phrases to add to your complex sentences.
Feedforward: Next time you could have more simple sentences.
Evaluation: I agree with Rosie, Next time I could have more simple sentences, maybe a wider range as well.